You may or may not know that around Halloween and Christmas I enhance my enjoyment of the holidays by writing "shorts" that I then give out to family and friends. Actually my published novel Past Sins began life as a Halloween short back in the early 2000's. The following sci-fi and horror short Desert Getaway, was written near the end of the 1990's. You will see references of the LA riots, etc. but this does not (in my opinion) detract from the overall story. Actually I am currently working on a "short" but it is not done yet so I thought I would post this one up here. I never really released this before so you all are seeing it for the first time. Hope you enjoy it and Happy Halloween!
A Weekend Getaway
An original short story by Don F. Ecker
"IT" became conscious in what other domains would have described as very early morning. At
first there was no knowing.... but confusion and fear raced through its mind. The thoughts IT had
were not formed in words.... it was not sure it knew or ....... remembered words. More like
concepts. Concepts and perhaps some would call them pictures formed..... not words. Desperately
IT tried to remember....the before. No physical feelings had yet manifested themselves. IT did not
even know if its eyes were open. The sensations were of DARKNESS....FLOATING....and
CONFUSION.
Slowly anger began to build. Anger and RAGE.... Since there was no sensation
of FEELING, IT did not yet know if it had limbs. Attempting to recall what IT thought it once
knew, IT lay there (it was lying, was it not?) and tried to remember. However the remembering
would not come and the anger and rage continued to build. There was something else..... IT knew
somewhere deep down inside that there should be a KNOWING..... but of WHAT? And it felt
...... LOWER.... as if it slipped DOWN into another place. This place felt LOWER but lower than
what, IT did not yet know nor remember. Time had no reference nor any meaning. IT was not
aware how long it had been in this place, or even where this place was. With no other sensory
information available, IT was now content to wait secure in its ANGER and RAGE. IT knew that
soon or later understanding would come.
A time later... AN IMAGE! Without warning IT remembered....a place. Flames, tall structures
sprouting....FIRE..cries from....beings and IT creeping down a long corridor...searching for...a
being. IT did not remember why, hence more confusion. IT knew it must preform...a task. Then
IT realized something else... IT could TASTE this memory. IT could smell the flames and the
burning structures. Excitement began to rage inside it. IT realized for the first time since IT
awakened....it breathed and its breath raced in and out! But what was this place...memory....task?
There must be more...has to be more.... and in frustration it SCREAMED!! With that verbal
release and horrible rage that had been contained inside, IT realized that it did feel....limbs. With
great effort it heaved out and up a viscous fluid from deep inside itself. IT had been lying in a
shallow depression covered by a fluid. All of IT had been covered to its....HEAD? A great
weariness now encompassed IT. With the discovery of independent movement IT could now lie
back and afford to wait. Now it was sure that other revelations MUST follow. IT would wait.
Samantha stood up from the campfire and stretched. Looking at her watch she observed that the
time was only 9:35 PM. But she was tired. God what a day, she thought. First the damned flat tire
on her truck, then the Beast (her affectionate name for the truck) overheats in this damned desert
air, then finding a good camping site. Now I am here in the middle of no where and screw the rest
of LA! Looking over at Bobbi, she wondered what would come next. Up until just recently she
had been a very happy heterosexual woman. Or so she thought. Her partner of two years Lance
Rogers had certainly surprised her. Samantha worked at one of the major LA studios as a creative
consultant for a fairly successful one hour adult drama series. Lance (who's real name was Walter
Beasom) was a struggling actor who literally charmed her pants off. Working on one episode as a
street hoodlum Lance (she preferred to more glamorous Lance to the pedestrian Walter) had
invited her out for a coffee latte which to her bemusement she accepted. He was good looking
and charming. After two dates she ended up sleeping with him and things took off. Lance also
worked waiting jobs between acting jobs to "Keep that frigging wolf from the door" but she had
always felt there was another side to him. Well true, he had a mild cocain habit which she did not
like. As a matter of fact she had warned him not to bring it home, but the warning was not too
strong. One night after they had drunk a bottle of Chardonnay he pulled a vial of coke out and
asked her to try it. She at first refused but then after he snorted a line and continued to persist she
figured what the hell. He handed her a McDonald's drink straw that he had cut in half and
instructed her to bend over the table and snort it up her nostril. As she did suddenly she had a
horrible sneeze and blew over $200.00 worth of cocain all over the carpet! In retrospect she
smiled but at the time Lance became almost crazy with rage. JESUS CHRIST YOU STUPID
BITCH! LOOK AT WHAT THE HELL YOU DID!! Things changed from then on. She couldn't
quite point her finger at when the differences happened but she always remembered this incident.
Lance had always been obsessed with one thing. He wanted to be a STAR. She tried to be
reasonable when he was fired from several waiter jobs because as he explained "Baby, the deal in
this town is networking! Who gives a DAMN about slopping dirty dishes when I need to be out
there meeting people. "It ain't who ya know but who ya blow" he was fond of saying. But then
she thought warily, that ain't necessarily so. She had gotten done early with work on a Friday
afternoon, and thinking that Lance was at his newest part time job, decided to go home early and
catch a quick nap then prepare a modest dinner. Loving to cook Samantha loved to test new
recipes she found. Walking into the front door she had noticed a new Lexis parked on the street
and Lances motorcycle in there driveway. Wondering what she would find inside she quietly
opened the door and walked inside. Hearing groans from the bedroom she walked over and
pushed the partially closed bedroom door open. Expecting to see Lance with another woman she
was frozen with shock when she saw the man she thought she might possible marry with his head
buried into the groin of another man, bobbing up and down.The other man was older than Lance
and had both hands on Lances head helping him move up and down on his semi erect penis.
Suddenly the shock wore off and she screamed! The strange mans eyes popped open and he tried
to jump up! When he did Lance attempted to jump to the side of the bed but one of the strangers
knees struck Lance in the side of the head and he involuntary bit down. Now the other man
screamed and what had been shocking now turned ugly. Lance fell off the bed and looked up.
Seeing Samantha standing there covering her mouth with both hands he jumped up and
backhanded her out of the doorway. The other man was groaning and shouting curses when for a
split second she recognized him. A married producer with two children. An inane thought coursed
through her mind that he produced one of the newer sit coms on a competing network. As the
producer hobbled about she noticed that Lance must have really bitten down hard because the
man had blood showing through his hastily retrieved underwear. Speaking of blood she suddenly
realized she was bleeding. When Lance backhanded her, he struck her nose which was now
bleeding freely. She ran to the kitchen and turned on the water and began to attempt to stanch the
flow of blood. She was not sure just what she felt then. Shock and confusion to be sure. But then
a great hollow emptiness filled her. She heard the front door open and someone leave. Lance
stuck his head in the door of the kitchen and said he would be back later to get his things. She
said nothing, and as a matter of fact the only thing she would ever say to him again was to leave
the keys by the front door. Two days later he did when he picked up the rest of his things. He
tried to speak to her but she knew there was nothing to say. As a matter of fact later that evening
she felt a strange but undeniable sense of freedom. The sex had been good for a while but she
could not deny that a sense of impending....not doom but something not good had stayed with her
for several months prior to (as she was now to think of it) "The Incident!"
Bobbi MacGregor was a new writer with Samantha's program. A twenty seven year old divorcee
"with no brats thank God!", had come on board just two months earlier. Hearing what had
happened to Sam, Bobbi suggested they "shake the stink of LA off" and take a two day camping
trip out into the desert. "Just the place to clear your head" Bobbi was to say. Having been born
and spending most of her life in Utah, Bobbi had a long history of recreating in the "great
outdoors". "My pop had three daughters and since he couldn't sire any males, we became his
surrogate boys club" she was to boast. Fishing, camping, and learning how to shoot .22 caliber
rifles was my whole adolescent" "I think when I developed breasts Pop was heartbroken!" she
was to say with a snicker. Samantha also enjoyed the great outdoors. That was the biggest reason
she bought "the Beast". Lance used to chide her about the truck. "You should at least get a Jeep
if you want something like that. For GOD's sake a Jeep is at least trendy" but she wouldn't
budge. As for the other outdoorsy stuff, she picked up lanterns and cooking gear over the last few
years for those times when she really wanted to shake out the cobwebs. The one thing she didn't
broadcast however was the Colt .357 Python revolver. Having survived the LA riots, she
suddenly decided better politically incorrect than dead. Taking shooting lessons at a local gun
range, and (God forbid if the studio found out) she joined the NRA. She found that she enjoyed
the feeling of mastery she achieved when she learned the fundamental's of combat shooting. The
Colt Python was the "King" of revolvers. Finding a 4 inch barreled version in a Burbank gun
shop, she hesitated at the $550.00 price tag.
cont. next
A Weekend Getaway
An original short story by Don F. Ecker
"IT" became conscious in what other domains would have described as very early morning. At
first there was no knowing.... but confusion and fear raced through its mind. The thoughts IT had
were not formed in words.... it was not sure it knew or ....... remembered words. More like
concepts. Concepts and perhaps some would call them pictures formed..... not words. Desperately
IT tried to remember....the before. No physical feelings had yet manifested themselves. IT did not
even know if its eyes were open. The sensations were of DARKNESS....FLOATING....and
CONFUSION.
Slowly anger began to build. Anger and RAGE.... Since there was no sensation
of FEELING, IT did not yet know if it had limbs. Attempting to recall what IT thought it once
knew, IT lay there (it was lying, was it not?) and tried to remember. However the remembering
would not come and the anger and rage continued to build. There was something else..... IT knew
somewhere deep down inside that there should be a KNOWING..... but of WHAT? And it felt
...... LOWER.... as if it slipped DOWN into another place. This place felt LOWER but lower than
what, IT did not yet know nor remember. Time had no reference nor any meaning. IT was not
aware how long it had been in this place, or even where this place was. With no other sensory
information available, IT was now content to wait secure in its ANGER and RAGE. IT knew that
soon or later understanding would come.
A time later... AN IMAGE! Without warning IT remembered....a place. Flames, tall structures
sprouting....FIRE..cries from....beings and IT creeping down a long corridor...searching for...a
being. IT did not remember why, hence more confusion. IT knew it must preform...a task. Then
IT realized something else... IT could TASTE this memory. IT could smell the flames and the
burning structures. Excitement began to rage inside it. IT realized for the first time since IT
awakened....it breathed and its breath raced in and out! But what was this place...memory....task?
There must be more...has to be more.... and in frustration it SCREAMED!! With that verbal
release and horrible rage that had been contained inside, IT realized that it did feel....limbs. With
great effort it heaved out and up a viscous fluid from deep inside itself. IT had been lying in a
shallow depression covered by a fluid. All of IT had been covered to its....HEAD? A great
weariness now encompassed IT. With the discovery of independent movement IT could now lie
back and afford to wait. Now it was sure that other revelations MUST follow. IT would wait.
Samantha stood up from the campfire and stretched. Looking at her watch she observed that the
time was only 9:35 PM. But she was tired. God what a day, she thought. First the damned flat tire
on her truck, then the Beast (her affectionate name for the truck) overheats in this damned desert
air, then finding a good camping site. Now I am here in the middle of no where and screw the rest
of LA! Looking over at Bobbi, she wondered what would come next. Up until just recently she
had been a very happy heterosexual woman. Or so she thought. Her partner of two years Lance
Rogers had certainly surprised her. Samantha worked at one of the major LA studios as a creative
consultant for a fairly successful one hour adult drama series. Lance (who's real name was Walter
Beasom) was a struggling actor who literally charmed her pants off. Working on one episode as a
street hoodlum Lance (she preferred to more glamorous Lance to the pedestrian Walter) had
invited her out for a coffee latte which to her bemusement she accepted. He was good looking
and charming. After two dates she ended up sleeping with him and things took off. Lance also
worked waiting jobs between acting jobs to "Keep that frigging wolf from the door" but she had
always felt there was another side to him. Well true, he had a mild cocain habit which she did not
like. As a matter of fact she had warned him not to bring it home, but the warning was not too
strong. One night after they had drunk a bottle of Chardonnay he pulled a vial of coke out and
asked her to try it. She at first refused but then after he snorted a line and continued to persist she
figured what the hell. He handed her a McDonald's drink straw that he had cut in half and
instructed her to bend over the table and snort it up her nostril. As she did suddenly she had a
horrible sneeze and blew over $200.00 worth of cocain all over the carpet! In retrospect she
smiled but at the time Lance became almost crazy with rage. JESUS CHRIST YOU STUPID
BITCH! LOOK AT WHAT THE HELL YOU DID!! Things changed from then on. She couldn't
quite point her finger at when the differences happened but she always remembered this incident.
Lance had always been obsessed with one thing. He wanted to be a STAR. She tried to be
reasonable when he was fired from several waiter jobs because as he explained "Baby, the deal in
this town is networking! Who gives a DAMN about slopping dirty dishes when I need to be out
there meeting people. "It ain't who ya know but who ya blow" he was fond of saying. But then
she thought warily, that ain't necessarily so. She had gotten done early with work on a Friday
afternoon, and thinking that Lance was at his newest part time job, decided to go home early and
catch a quick nap then prepare a modest dinner. Loving to cook Samantha loved to test new
recipes she found. Walking into the front door she had noticed a new Lexis parked on the street
and Lances motorcycle in there driveway. Wondering what she would find inside she quietly
opened the door and walked inside. Hearing groans from the bedroom she walked over and
pushed the partially closed bedroom door open. Expecting to see Lance with another woman she
was frozen with shock when she saw the man she thought she might possible marry with his head
buried into the groin of another man, bobbing up and down.The other man was older than Lance
and had both hands on Lances head helping him move up and down on his semi erect penis.
Suddenly the shock wore off and she screamed! The strange mans eyes popped open and he tried
to jump up! When he did Lance attempted to jump to the side of the bed but one of the strangers
knees struck Lance in the side of the head and he involuntary bit down. Now the other man
screamed and what had been shocking now turned ugly. Lance fell off the bed and looked up.
Seeing Samantha standing there covering her mouth with both hands he jumped up and
backhanded her out of the doorway. The other man was groaning and shouting curses when for a
split second she recognized him. A married producer with two children. An inane thought coursed
through her mind that he produced one of the newer sit coms on a competing network. As the
producer hobbled about she noticed that Lance must have really bitten down hard because the
man had blood showing through his hastily retrieved underwear. Speaking of blood she suddenly
realized she was bleeding. When Lance backhanded her, he struck her nose which was now
bleeding freely. She ran to the kitchen and turned on the water and began to attempt to stanch the
flow of blood. She was not sure just what she felt then. Shock and confusion to be sure. But then
a great hollow emptiness filled her. She heard the front door open and someone leave. Lance
stuck his head in the door of the kitchen and said he would be back later to get his things. She
said nothing, and as a matter of fact the only thing she would ever say to him again was to leave
the keys by the front door. Two days later he did when he picked up the rest of his things. He
tried to speak to her but she knew there was nothing to say. As a matter of fact later that evening
she felt a strange but undeniable sense of freedom. The sex had been good for a while but she
could not deny that a sense of impending....not doom but something not good had stayed with her
for several months prior to (as she was now to think of it) "The Incident!"
Bobbi MacGregor was a new writer with Samantha's program. A twenty seven year old divorcee
"with no brats thank God!", had come on board just two months earlier. Hearing what had
happened to Sam, Bobbi suggested they "shake the stink of LA off" and take a two day camping
trip out into the desert. "Just the place to clear your head" Bobbi was to say. Having been born
and spending most of her life in Utah, Bobbi had a long history of recreating in the "great
outdoors". "My pop had three daughters and since he couldn't sire any males, we became his
surrogate boys club" she was to boast. Fishing, camping, and learning how to shoot .22 caliber
rifles was my whole adolescent" "I think when I developed breasts Pop was heartbroken!" she
was to say with a snicker. Samantha also enjoyed the great outdoors. That was the biggest reason
she bought "the Beast". Lance used to chide her about the truck. "You should at least get a Jeep
if you want something like that. For GOD's sake a Jeep is at least trendy" but she wouldn't
budge. As for the other outdoorsy stuff, she picked up lanterns and cooking gear over the last few
years for those times when she really wanted to shake out the cobwebs. The one thing she didn't
broadcast however was the Colt .357 Python revolver. Having survived the LA riots, she
suddenly decided better politically incorrect than dead. Taking shooting lessons at a local gun
range, and (God forbid if the studio found out) she joined the NRA. She found that she enjoyed
the feeling of mastery she achieved when she learned the fundamental's of combat shooting. The
Colt Python was the "King" of revolvers. Finding a 4 inch barreled version in a Burbank gun
shop, she hesitated at the $550.00 price tag.
cont. next